UN LUN DUN
By CHINA MIÉVILLE

Del Ray, 2007
ISBN: 9780345495167
448 Pages; Hardcover
GENRE(S): Fiction, Fantasy, Young Adult

Reviewed by Kyle Olson

With the almost freakish success of a certain set of tales about a boy wizard, more and more "adult" authors are giving YA fiction a shot. Plus, these days, a satisfyingly increasing number of kids are reading, and the idea of adults reading books for kids is becoming more acceptable. There's got to be metric buttloads of money in the YA section of the bookstore, and even socialist, new weird/dark fantasy authors like China Miéville cannot resist its siren song. Unfortunately, despite such authors' immense creativity and writing talent, the first attempt doesn't always turn out as they'd like.

Un Lun Dun, begins like a lot of YA books: A girl and her friend notice strange goings-on, follow a sentient umbrella through the streets of London at night, and end up transported to a bizarre alternative "abcity" called Un Lun Dun (Un-London) with bus-blimps run by conductors (who embody the electrical double-nature of their name), the maligned ghost-people of Wraithtown, terrifying and carnivorous giraffes, tailors with needles for hair that sew suits made of books, and trashcan ninjas (binjas). They also, of course, discover that there is a horrible plague of malicious pollution called the Smog, from which one of the girls is predestined to save Un Lun Dun.

Despite the sort of tried and true YA fiction hero-plot, Miéville also wants to differentiate himself from this standard "chosen one" cliché. The "propheseers" of Un Lun Dun tell the chosen one she is destined to win her first skirmish with the Smog. Instead, she is knocked out within seconds, taken back to London, and never remembers any of the wonders of the abcity. Her friend Deeba (written in the prophesy book as the "funny sidekick") can't get the plight of Un Lun Dun out of her mind and decides to find a way to return and help, thereby making her the "un-chosen one" who forgoes huge portions of the preordained "quest of the shwazzy" (the ULD pronunciation of choisi, French for "chosen"), and just skips to the end. Why should she go through seven time-consuming and possibly lethal tasks when she can simply skip to the part where she gets the ultimate weapon? Wouldn't that simply make more sense?

Knowing Miéville is a socialist (who ran for the British House of Commons in 2001 and has written books on Marxism) makes reading some of the subtext of the novel a bit of a left-wing Where's Waldo? Miéville is not attempting to brainwash kids, or trying to get them to forcibly redistribute their parents' wealth, but many of the obstacles that must be overcome have a distinct left-leaning/socialist flare to them. The antagonist is an evil cloud of pollution; those in power in Un Lun Dun are evil, misguided, or in with the Smog; the propheseers, who could be seen as the religion of ULD, are misguided in their attempts to help the people and are doing far more harm than good until a completely average but dedicated and active girl (proletariat?) helps show them the error of their ways. To be fair, Miéville frequently uses a corrupt governing class as a plot element in order to enhance the victorious/heroic/intelligent underdog nature of his protagonists. It simply takes on a somewhat sly, proselytizing aura in the milieu of a YA book.

While the characters and situations in Un Lun Dun are unique and clever, often relying on wordy puns and clever allusions, the novel pales in comparison to Miéville's usual fiction. In previous novels, Miéville's boundless imagination helped to create rich and colorful realities and settings in which his novels take place. Un Lun Dun's world is intriguing only in that, since it is so gloriously random, a la Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, there is no way for the reader to know what lies two chapters ahead. Miéville offers his landscape in a whirlwind tour, which allows the reader no time to realize that the people and places in Un Lun Dun are far more 2D than those of his other novels. The ghost-town, the arachnid-laden Webminster Alley, and the Blabyrinth—the brain-shaped maze of the vocabulary-loving Mr. Speaker—are all fun locales that add to the inherent absurdity of the novel but generally have little to to offer the reader other than their witty names. All these ideas are entertaining and charming in their own way, but something about them lacks the staying power of the realms of classic YA fiction.

However, the rapid-fire, episodic nature of the book is exciting, and the story never stalls. And even though it mirrors the classic, absurdist, and word-loving worlds of Lewis Carroll and the like, it does bring a fresh set of ideas and concepts to the table. Sadly, with no YA literature history under his belt, Miéville hoped that by making the protagonist a junior high student, toning down the darkness and violence, simplifying his vocabulary, and tipping his hat to YA classics, it would work. All of this merely feels as if he's attempting to write with a willful crippling of his skills. Let it be said that this isn't a bad book by any scale. It just feels terribly average compared to Miéville's "adult" writing.

(July, 2007)

 

 
     

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