SHORTCOMINGS
By ADRIAN TOMINE

Drawn & Quarterly, 2007
ISBN: 9781897299166
112 pages; Hardcover
GENRE(S): Fiction, Comics/Graphic Novel

Reviewed by Marie Mundaca

Adrian Tomine is a master of the understated. His neat, precise lines and the quiet expressions on his characters' faces mask their tumultuous emotions. Shortcomings, collected from Tomine's Optic Nerve comic, heralds the first time Tomine, a fourth-generation Asian-American, has written about race. But while the main characters in Shortcomings are Asian-Americans, Americans of all ethnicities will be able to relate to this tale of a couple and their friends struggling with their identities, their parents' desires to control their lives, and the balancing act required to manage relationships as they progress into adulthood.

Ben Tanaka, like many of Tomine's other characters, is an artsy west-coast hipster. Ben's sarcasm sometimes borders on cruelty, especially when he's talking to his smart, beautiful girlfriend, Miko Hayashi. He thinks the Asian-American film festival she just helped organize is crap ("Everyone knows it's garbage, but they clap for it anyway because it was made by some Chinese girl from Oakland."), and he can't even muster up any tenderness when Miko leaves for New York City to start an internship. Instead, Tanaka uses Miko's absence as an excuse to pursue the blonde women he desires. When Miko stops returning Ben's phone calls, Ben takes off for New York, staying with Alice, a friend from Berkeley who has just moved in with her new girlfriend.
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Shortcomings shows off how much Tomine has matured as both an artist and a storyteller. The characters are much more complete and humanized, and his lines even more confident. He can convey a change in emotion via a minor variation in facial expression. Where his style used to seem derivative of artists like Dan Clowes and Jaime Hernandez, Tomine has stripped away much of their over-the-top cartooniness. What remains is as stark and raw as a Ingmar Bergman film. Also like Bergman, Tomine is not afraid to mix drama and humor, and some of the book's best moments come from comic outbursts that occur during highly confrontational incidents. And, unlike previous collections, Shortcomings is one long story, allowing Tomine the time to allow the story to unfold naturally, avoiding the abrupt endings present in some of the Summer Blonde stories.

As in many of Tomine's earlier stories, we are not seeing the main characters at their best, but they are liked in spite of themselves. Ben's comments on Miko's new life in New York are hilarious and mean. Miko's coolness toward Ben after he finds her in New York is tragic but completely understandable. And, despite the serious subject, the book has many laugh-out-loud moments, like when Ben goes to the apartment of a girl he has a crush on and discovers her highly unusual art.

What plagues Ben's and Miko's relationship is how even the most personal thing one can imagine—such as determining with whom one falls in love—can be interpreted as a political act. Ben and Miko struggle with the fact that they may be dating merely to please their parents and their Asian-American community. Miko contends that Ben's attraction to blondes is a rebellious act. Ben, Miko, and Ben's friend Alice slowly understand that everything they do is interpreted by others through a lens of ethnicity. Is it possible to get out from under this microscope? Tomine doesn't attempt to address the issues he raises, instead allowing his characters deal with the fallout of their realizations. Ultimately, in this harsh tale of a couple struggling with identity, Tomine lets the reader decide if anyone is right or wrong.

(October, 2007)

 

 
     

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