DRIVEN OR FORCED ONWARD BY OR AS IF BY WIND OR WATER
By EDGAR MOLLÈRE

Vagabond Press, 2008
ISBN: 9780975571651
136 pages; Paperback
GENRE(S): Fiction

Reviewed by Marie Mundaca

These are the people who are not like everyone else—the poorly dressed, natty-haired girl from P.E. class who slept with everyone, the soft fat kid who would never be able to fulfill his potential, that creepy boy who taxidermied roadkill. Edgar Mollère, in driven or forced onward by or as if by wind or water, explores the lives of three children raised in a rural community with seemingly little adult intervention by the stepmother they hate or their non-communicative Vietnam vet father. These almost feral children are left to figure out life for themselves and focus on the rudiments of survival, sex, death, and food. Mollère never treats them as magical creatures or pariahs, making driven or forced a compelling, difficult experience.

Watt, Sister, and Tubby are the sort of kids readers know of but probably don't know very well, and Mollère does a great job of not making them stereotypes. Tubby clings to his stepmother and overeats, but he has an acute interest in science and an intelligence that seems way beyond the limited language he uses in his school reports. Sister uses sex as a way to gain entry into social circles she would otherwise be denied but also uses it to chip away at her lack of identity and discover her core self. Watt, the oldest of the three, has taken on the role of patriarch due to his father's post-traumatic stress disorder, but being ill-prepared for such duties, he decides to teach Tubby that what it is to be a man is to track, kill, and dress game. All the children are presented as having self-knowledge, but they are powerless to stop their destructive behaviors.

Mollère's style is experimental, and the book itself is formatted in a variety of ways. Sometimes two characters talk at once, the page split down the middle. Sometimes the focus is on one character, but the thoughts are disjointed and meander across the page. Much of driven or forced reads like an extended prose-poem, with evocative, visceral phrases that emphasize the raw, immediate lives of these three kids. The sections that work the best are the ones in which two character's monologues overlap in vertical columns; it gives readers the sense of seeing a movie on a split screen with stories that intersect and diverge. In one particularly stirring section early in the book, Tubby tells a story of how Watt sticks up for him: "He's quiet but he broke a big kid's knee with an old rusty adze one time. The boy was bigger and had a face like a mule's." Meanwhile, in Watt's section, he repeats "Broken bones. Broken bones" for two pages.

There is only a tenuous plot in driven or forced of Watt tracking a big buck and trying to teach this skill to Tubby; it is a character-driven book, and readers are allowed to enter the deep, private thoughts of the three children, disturbing, introspective and naïve. The book is told almost exclusively by the inner dialogue of the three children as they think about their family, school, or tracking game. Although the father hardly appears in the book, his influence on the children, especially Sister, is evident. In one passage, she writes an imaginary story about how she and her father go rafting in the Colorado River; in another, she describes what his voice is like: "It's true he didn't talk much… and probably even less to his 'little girl,' as I was known… but when he did, it was all warm honey and oats."

Readers may tire of some of the dialect—all the characters say "ta" for "to," for example—and it may not have been necessary to carry this vernacular through the entire book. Readers will understand that the characters are smart but uneducated pretty early on. But the stylistic tics are not all that distracting. Some of the more chaotic pages are very hard to follow, and although that may be the intent, it doesn't further the story as well as it should. The story gets particularly disorderly towards the end, and since there is quite a bit of action occurring readers may be left a little perplexed.

But the beautiful prose that tells of the basic drives of human nature will stick with readers much longer than any confusion about the ending. Mollère has written a gorgeous book about violence and sadness that bursts with life.

(February, 2009)

 

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